To not exsit sounds very alluring,
It sounds placid,
It sounds voided,
None the less, it sounds like paradise,
No feelings,
No thoughts,
No emotions,
Just my body floating perceptually in a pure, white eternity,
Desolated,
Vacent,
Alone,
Endlessly floating,
Placid Paradise.
It sounds placid,
It sounds voided,
None the less, it sounds like paradise,
No feelings,
No thoughts,
No emotions,
Just my body floating perceptually in a pure, white eternity,
Desolated,
Vacent,
Alone,
Endlessly floating,
Placid Paradise.
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This one feels empty. Which is good because that is the feeling you are conveying. The last line bugs me a bit. I don't know why.
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